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Dear Adam:

I have thought about your formation
(Our Lord extracting his glorious rib.)
I have examined your godly ribs,
Found nothing Christian.

You are part deity, but a Grecian one:
A cruel and beautiful bust of marble,
Equally cold.

You are also part lover.
This I have uncovered unexpectedly
In eyes that defy marble.
In eyes that blink, that lower with soft lids,
In lips a healthy sunset color
Like wild petals.

Part conqueror;
You have indeed conquered certain temples.
Each holy edifice, you desired
Not for the crumbling of stone fortress-walls,
But for the repose upon the soft pews within;
Not for stained-glass windows or incense and altars,
But for the triumph usurped upon entrance.
The holy water splashed upon the floor:
You have conquered me.

Above all, you are part human.
This was the most shocking discovery:
It manifested itself in your rhythmic chest,
In the way that your marble ribs rose
and fell, undulating and pale.
Your dark lover-eyes closed, languid flames extinguished.  
Your conquering embrace softened- just slightly -
And a human hand, immaculate from between lashes,
A sinning hand, a fallible, beauteous, mortal human hand,
Searched for mine
(Which I hid, cunningly, beneath my heavy head.
Your hand, ever-human, could not find it.)

Dear Adam:
I will not have that delicious golden apple.
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Author's Comments

I could never pick out which eleven were yours
and which one was divine.


proving a point
(which has nothing to do with love or religion or sex.)

updated twice - still editing!
it's not really about sex,
as always,
and I feel like I'm contradicting myself...


9/2: thank you so much for the DLD! (feat: [link])
I edited it yet again... never done! :aww:
10/31: changed end

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:iconsweetblackrose13:
Wow, this is incredible. Such a great perspective, and you definitely succeeded in proving your point.

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~Member of the 3eyes club! Inanely Inspired Insanity [link]~ =)

We picked strawberry peaches
where fields smelled like lemon.
:iconlaughatyourself:
Absolutely amazing, lovelovelove it <3
:iconkillcaiti:
:aww: thank you so much!

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>engage.
:iconkillcaiti:
thank you very much! :heart:

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>engage.
:iconsweetblackrose13:
You're welcome :)

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~Member of the 3eyes club! Inanely Inspired Insanity [link]~ =)

We picked strawberry peaches
where fields smelled like lemon.
:iconxosarah13:
you've done it again ms. duttry
:iconxosarah13:
shut up you are awesome caiti <33333333333333333

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